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Spewing out too many words since November 2003
Chapter? Sure, why not?

Chapter 5: The BirthdayCollapse )
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It's been an odd week, but here's a chapter. :D

Neville Longbottom in the Garden of the Hesperides, Chapter 4Collapse )
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Well, Lily can't make it to lunch, apparently, but here's someone else to check in with.
Neville Longbottom in the Garden of the Hesperides, Chapter 3Collapse )
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Well, I took a couple of days off, but I'm getting back to work. I'm starting chapter 6 soon.

Since these were written at a breakneck pace, followed by a breather, then another breakneck pace without checking back, I'd appreciate anyone saying, "Um... you're contradicting your own story there..." or "Really, it's not spelled that way." :p

Anyway, shall we check in with the fully parented Harry?
Neville Longbottom in the Garden of the Hesperides, Chapter 2: The Most Helpful TreeCollapse )
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Oh, my god, I literally can't not post. I promised myself that, after all of these stalled stories, I wouldn't, but I'm enjoying this one. I'm finished with Chapter 4 and I'm about to start chapter 5, and I thought... what the heck. Based on that AU I did, "Chosen," as mentioned in the last bunch of ask-the-character questions.

And yes, I realized later on that Neville's grandfather should have died at a later point, but I've decided that it means something that he didn't; I'm not sure what yet.

The Cry In the GardenCollapse )
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Brief answers, any fandom that I do.
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Ah, action scenes. I enjoy them, but they are challenging. And it was time for Jason to find his power.
Chapter Eight: I Blow Myself (and Reyna) AwayCollapse )
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I admit, one of the reasons I'm slow on this (other than my re-discovered screw-up) is that I'm actually having a hard time getting through a Riordan book. (I know, right?) It's the new Magnus Chase, The Hammer of Thor. I just literally don't care about it at all. I'm pretty much reading because Percy's supposed to show up at the end. It's essentially the same plot as Sea of Monsters (one of the hero's friends is about to be forced into a marriage and we have to race the clock against it), only without the plot part of getting there to save him (her, in this case). Sea of Monsters without the Sea of Monsters.

Maybe I'm just missing references to some epic Norse saga because I've never been as fond of Norse mythology as I am of classical, but I can't seem to engage in the plot at all. My bad.

Oh, well.

I decided to refocus my attention on the PJO-verse of it all, and think about what little things in the latter HoO books and of course The Hidden Oracle might point toward Trials of Apollo clues.
Just blue-skyingCollapse )
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I'm listening to Blood of Olympus.

Big goof. Huge. Dakota flat out says he can't drive -- never learned. And is 17 at that point, making him only one year older than Jason.

I now have to figure out how to make Dakota lose a year and forget that he can drive.

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Okay, left them facing a pirate in the Bayshore mall in Eureka.

Chapter Seven: The Queen Gives Me My AllowanceCollapse )
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Finally -- I couldn't get these guy out of the barn! And then I realized it was because I forgot to set soemthing in the last chapter that I really kind of needed to do for the plot, so...

I made a change in how Reyna left the ship in the last chapter. This is the new dialogue:
She nodded. "There were men in collars and I think they could get shocked or zapped or something. I told my sister that we just got away from that, and she said, 'We didn't get away, we were shoved out.' And she's right, only…" She looked at us with a hint of the old defiance. "I don't think boys ought to be treated like that any more than girls ought to. I don't think it's right. And I said that. And I went back to the pirates. She can do what she wants. But she's wrong. No one should be treated that way."

"No argument," I said.

"Anyway, they turned south again. That cruise ship was headed for the Panama canal. They wanted another whack at it. So did I. Only a couple of days out, that's when we hit a sea monster. It was the first one we saw since we got out of the Sea of Monsters. We had to go far out to sea to avoid it, and every time they got near the coast, it went after them again. They said in the old days, people would sacrifice a maiden to it. They got a funny look in their eyes, and the next thing you know, I’m in a cell and they're headed back for the coast. I broke out, took what I could and… left."

"How did you get to shore?"

"I had help," she said. "And we'll leave it there for now." She picked at the sleeve of her blouse. "That was last week. And I realized I can't really stay here. I needed to get back, because I left someone there. So… I figured I needed leverage to get back on."

"You're going back to help someone?" Bobby asked.

She nodded. "The one who helped me get away. I think they took him. He hasn't come to join me. And then maybe I'll take the ship. I
am good at being a pirate."

Chapter Six: I Give Directions To A HorseCollapse )
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Okay, so I'm going back over some of the PJO books, and there's a fairly regular occurrence of the kids not getting the music that their elders listened to. I see it a lot in a lot of fiction.

I just wondered: Is that really all that common?

I mean, yeah, I don't listen to a lot of contemporary stuff now (just lost interest at some point), but when I was a kid, I loved my mom's music as much as my own generations'. I mean, I listened to Madonna and Michael Jackson and Wham and all of the 80s greats, but I liked the Beatles and the Surpremes and Chuck Berry and... well, honestly, I liked my grandmother's big band music, too. I was always pretty into whatever happened to be playing.

I dunno. I guess I don't get the, "Ick, it's not of right now, so I hate it" thing.
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So, I figured it was about time to add a pretty prominent character...

Chapter Five: We Are Captured By The World"s Shortest PirateCollapse )
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All right, that one came out fast enough. (I was kind of in a hurry to get to an introduction...)
Chapter Four: The Quest Gets Off To a Perfect StartCollapse )
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And, just because I sort of enjoy making up cover schemes...

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I promise to get them on the road next chapter. Meanwhile, maybe a dream visit with a couple of old friends?

Chapter Three: I Flip A CoinCollapse )
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Still feeling my way into this world...
Chapter Two: The Apprentice Gets A ShockCollapse )
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Well, I wanted to get writing again, but obviously, I can't seem to slip into Panem anymore. Drat. But trying out New Rome is fun. I think I'm starting to get Jason's voice.
Chapter One: My Wish Is GrantedCollapse )
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I went on a two-week vacation home to western New York. I rode the Maid of the Mist (haven't done that since little-kid-dom, and it was a blast), and visited family, and went to my favorite place in the world, Letchworth State Park. I got to talk to two friends who are still in the area. And I got sad because the reason only two people are still around, I think, is that the economy is even more tanked there than it used to be. Buffalo's perking up (well, actually, I kind of think "gentrifying" may be closer to the mark in some ways), but Niagara Falls, NY is dire, and my hometown... I went down Main Street and it was... did I already use "dire"? They're trying, God knows, but you can only have so many supporting businesses in town when there's not a big industry left to support. I picked up a copy of the local paper, where I did my first pro writing (paid by the inch, when I was in high school), and I saw the refurbished park, and how someone restored the old Victorian I used to live in when it was split into apartments. (Hint on bad economy: A six bedroom, three bath house on a quarter acre of land with a swimming pool across the street from a park is valued under six figures. Oh, and a BLOCK OF BUILDINGS auctioned off for $350.)

On a more positive note, I visited out around Palmyra, too, and saw three missionaries acting like total teenagers, having a rolling race down Hill Cumorah.

I can't seem to get writing again, so I may have to just issue apologies, wipe the slate clean, and start in another fandom. I'm kind of running out of stuff to say on THG. (No, I haven't started hating it or anything -- I still love all my fandoms -- I've just been finding it a chore not to repeat myself lately.) I'm thinking about PJO. I got half a book mapped out of Jason's pre-HOO adventures, just for kicks.
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I keep obsessing over Gloss and Cashmere. What do their parents do during the rebellion? Gloss's girlfriend? for Angela
Mother MyrrhCollapse )

Any chance of a conversation between Duronda and some of the other victors, where Duronda mentions meeting Mags' mother? Or just other behind the scenes victor interaction/shenanigans for Maraudercat
ParadeCollapse )
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