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Ville Sauvage - The Phantom Librarian
Spewing out too many words since November 2003
fernwithy
fernwithy
Ville Sauvage
I was re-reading Ville-Sauvage last night--or what little exists of it--and I think I started in the wrong place. I know the plot almost entirely, but the pace was completely off and no one was behaving. I may just pitch the four sections so far written and go from a clean slate, fresh chapter 1. Any objections if I do?
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hermia7 From: hermia7 Date: July 26th, 2011 11:41 pm (UTC) (Link)
Yay, go for it! And also please to be working on turning that short story into a novel. Dewit. (http://abchao.com/blog/2011/5/9/video-chao-campabsence-of-dignity.html)
sgt_majorette From: sgt_majorette Date: July 27th, 2011 02:24 am (UTC) (Link)

How Dare You?

The FanFic Macoutes know where you live...
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From: (Anonymous) Date: July 27th, 2011 06:53 pm (UTC) (Link)

mmm....

well if you think it's for the best.....

pity, they were nice first 4 chapters

~Alex Wells
From: (Anonymous) Date: July 28th, 2011 12:59 am (UTC) (Link)
Happy to read anything you write :)

-Maraudercat
From: erv2 Date: July 28th, 2011 08:11 am (UTC) (Link)
Well put Maraudercat. And seconded!
From: (Anonymous) Date: July 30th, 2011 05:52 am (UTC) (Link)
Thirded (if thats a word) :-)
starnightmuse From: starnightmuse Date: July 28th, 2011 05:03 pm (UTC) (Link)

Awwww.... bummer but well...

well it's your story. so you more than anyone knows what's the best thing for it to work

that being said, could you leave the original 4 chapters up somehere? a draft page or here in your journal

there were a a number of gems in those (like the entrance of villanueva and the oversees competition)

or maybe incorporate them somehow to the New version?

anyway looking forward to the new and improved "ville Sauvage"
From: severely_lupine Date: July 29th, 2011 02:01 am (UTC) (Link)
No objections at all. A writer occasionally has to start over. I know I've done it. Anything that gets the story written (excited to read it still).
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