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A Drift of Azaleas is up at SugarQuill. A few added paras here and… - The Phantom Librarian
Spewing out too many words since November 2003
fernwithy
fernwithy
A Drift of Azaleas is up at SugarQuill. A few added paras here and there, one reflecting on Sirius's father. Some language tweaking. (Note to self: "deranged" is not a word that should be used twice in six pages. It really sticks out.) I also stashed it at my FFN account, but if there's a choice, I'll direct people to the site without pop-ups, even though I have them blocked on this end. They just annoy me.
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From: roseblue Date: August 3rd, 2004 08:57 pm (UTC) (Link)
I really like the story. I especially liked the part where Sirius has a nice memory of Regulus and then replaces it with a bad memory. That felt very realistic to me. Your portrayal of Sirius's father was a lot like mine which I enjoyed. You caught Mrs. Black's portrait and Kreacher darn near perfect in my opinion. My best part was where Kreacher said that Sirius gave up Potter. Perfect. I also liked the words Sirius put on his mom's stone. Do you want me to put another review on ffn or not? That way its official.:)
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