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Narrow Path repost - The Phantom Librarian
Spewing out too many words since November 2003
fernwithy
fernwithy
Narrow Path repost
Okay, I'm just finishing up the "House of Cards" re-write. I don't think it merits an appendix to bring it back up, since changes were relatively minor (also, serious writer's block), so I'm just going to jump into the Narrow Path re-write.

The generalized things I can think of are getting more into depth on the deaths of the victors, since Haymitch's lack of focus on them seems odd now; same with Danny's death. So as I find places, I'll put in info about that.

I think I won't get into the Gia business. It's off Haymitch's mind, and I think it would be a distraction from everything else.

Anything else on a general level on that story, to think about as I go?
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sonetka From: sonetka Date: September 20th, 2015 05:53 am (UTC) (Link)
Not really, I think both of those decisions make sense. Considering the amount of trauma Haymitch has gone through in his life, Gia is, for the moment, receipted and filed somewhere very far back in his brain. Not that the might not be reminded of her fleetingly now and then by a certain popular victor, but he's got more pressing concerns.
From: liam Fitzpatrick Date: September 20th, 2015 02:08 pm (UTC) (Link)

A few tiny probably stupid things.

More Reflection at the end of the wzr on how much he lost and all those who died . Also more of a reaction to prim and finnick dying. Such as recalling helping finnick during his first year as mentor or the conversations with prim during the quell. Haymitch and prim became quite close in GM during the games.
Cant wait for rewrite know it will be great as always.


Also please have some gia recollections. Surely in a war and at the endgame she'd be in his thoughts somewhere?.

Liam

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