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PJO/HoO: The Belly of the Beast, Chapter Six: I Give Directions To A Horse - The Phantom Librarian
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PJO/HoO: The Belly of the Beast, Chapter Six: I Give Directions To A Horse
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shiiki From: shiiki Date: September 25th, 2016 05:31 am (UTC) (Link)
I'm really loving the way you're writing Reyna! I do love a feisty heroine and she's fierce and smart and loyal. (And reminds me of Ruth from the Teddy stories now, too.)

Also the start of her and Scipio's relationship! Yay! Although I suspect that this may not be the last we'll see of Scipio. He seems like a pretty handy character to keep in reserve for an emergency escape or something later ... Though man, the more we see of Reyna and her Pegasus, the more bittersweet it is since we know what happens to Scipio in the end.

The pacing is definitely starting to feel like a PJO/HOO novel now, with adventure after adventure following.
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: September 25th, 2016 09:50 pm (UTC) (Link)
Yeah. I think I want to look at Reyna and Scipio, just because it seemed like there was a lot there.

LOL, I guess she does have a bit of Ruthless in her, doesn't she?
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