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Neville Longbottom in the Garden of the Hesperides, Chapter 2 - The Phantom Librarian
Spewing out too many words since November 2003
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Neville Longbottom in the Garden of the Hesperides, Chapter 2
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From: (Anonymous) Date: November 12th, 2016 04:02 pm (UTC) (Link)
I've been reading your fiction for years but I've never commented before, and thought it was time to rectify that. I even read The Hunger Games in order to have the background for your fics!

I am delighted that you've returned to HP, and an AU, no less! Can't wait to see what you do with this.

One teeny, tiny nitpick. This is not my reason for commenting, but you did ask people to point stuff out. Your use of British words and idioms is usually spot on, and you have mostly correctly referred to Neville's fringe as a fringe. But when the boys bump into Malfoy you suddenly have Neville flattening his bangs.

Thanks again, and I'm excited to read more as iv comes.

Jo.
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: November 13th, 2016 09:53 pm (UTC) (Link)
:facepalm: I kept catching myself doing that and I thought I'd gotten them all. One must have slipped by!

I haven't done a full-on AU for a while. A few little scenarios, including this one, but I haven't done a full-length one since I was writing Star Wars stuff.
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