This story makes me happy. I have just put this chapter in my text to speech reader so I can listen to it tomorrow. I have to finish my reading for the podcast tomorrow first. Please keep the chapters coming.
What speech reader do you use? I've been using a free version to check chapters for obvious missteps (easy to miss an "of" reading to yourself; not as easy to miss a missing one when someone is reading it aloud).
I use iSpeak it for Macs. It's great for proofing as you are using a text reader for. I can usually find the obvious missteps that don't get picked up. I've had a couple of people have me listen to their stuff to catch them too.