November 23rd, 2016 01:12 pm (UTC)
Loving this story and this look at Neville. So interesting to see what changes there are and why. Petunia just put more thought and money into that gift than 17 years worth in cannon! In my head-cannon, James refers to her as Petty, if it should happen to come up and you feel like using it.
Thank you for telling us who the teens were, because I haven't read Comororn, and it bothered me that I couldn't tell who they were. It definitely seems like you're setting them up to reappear, especially since two of them already did on the trip home.
I'm so curious about how this is going to go... Who the villain will be, how Hermione, Snape, Hagrid, and the other students and teachers will fit into this new puzzle.