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Neville Longbottom in the Garden of the Hesperides, Chapter 5 - The Phantom Librarian
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Neville Longbottom in the Garden of the Hesperides, Chapter 5
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From: (Anonymous) Date: December 2nd, 2016 02:33 am (UTC) (Link)
I wonder if Sirius' friends have made a tally of the women he takes home and, if they did, were able to keep track.

Forgot to mention this in the previous chapter, but you write young cheerful kids well. Be it Pete here or little James in the Teddy story. Ickle squishy monkeys.

Revelation time! Interesting as to who set off the butterflies in this verse. All things considered, Neville seems to have taken the news as well as he could; then again, he's not in his Furious Fifteens.

A bit of real life precedent with the way the Crups were bred. It'd be nice for someone like Hagrid to spearhead a breeding program to excise that selective aggression out.

--FFR
From: (Anonymous) Date: December 2nd, 2016 02:37 am (UTC) (Link)
PS: Also can relate to Neville having "social fatigue" when it comes to excessive gatherings.
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