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Neville Longbottom in the Garden of the Hesperides, Chapter 7 - The Phantom Librarian
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Neville Longbottom in the Garden of the Hesperides, Chapter 7
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author_by_night From: author_by_night Date: February 18th, 2017 02:02 pm (UTC) (Link)
Sorry this review is so late - I didn't see that you'd updated.

I like the setup you have with the... quartet now, I guess? Although my sense somehow (and I don't know what you have planned yet, if anything) is that Neville and Hermione and Harry and Ron are going to be a little more divided for a while. Not in a dramatic way or anything, I just think it's going to take Harry and Ron a while to warm up to Hermione, although Neville brings out her sweet side (as he does in canon), so that might help. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes friendshipwise - the troll in the dungeon scene in particular.

Edited at 2017-02-18 02:05 pm (UTC)
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