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Shades, Chapter Two: Shapeshifting, pt. 2 - The Phantom Librarian
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Shades, Chapter Two: Shapeshifting, pt. 2
When last we left Our Handsome Heroes, Tonks had, to her consternation, learned that her Patronus had taken on a new form... and to Remus's even greater consternation, the form is a werewolf. Remus has confirmed to Dumbledore that it's her new Patronus, and Dumbledore will get word to the Order that it really is Tonks.

She has a bit of trouble sleeping, and goes into the office Sunday morning, where she finds a surprise.




As soon as the lift door opened on level two, Tonks knew something had happened.

There was none of the usual chatter, no high-strung laughter from people coming off of a stressful Saturday night shift. A few people were standing in the aisles between the cubicles, looking dazed. In his cubicle, Dawlish was staring at a blank report scroll, blinking rapidly. He moved a quill toward the scroll, moved it away, moved it back again.

Wrote nothing.

"Dawlish?" she said, taking a tentative step toward the entrance.

He looked up, wrinkled his nose in unhidden dislike, and determinedly set to filling out his report.

A dark hand fell on her shoulder. "Good morning, Tonks," Kingsley Shacklebolt said.

"What's happened?"

He started walking her to her cubicle. "Amelia Bones is dead," he said quietly. "She was found in her flat early this morning. A Muggle neighbor with whom she habitually breakfasts became concerned when she didn't appear, and called their policemen. They're quite confused, of course. There was no way in or out. Signs of quite a struggle, but no sign of escape or entrance."

Tonks tried to absorb this, her mind still fuzzy from lack of sleep. "Her anti-Apparition wards?" she asked.

"Shattered," Kingsley said, rubbing his head. They reached Tonks's cubicle and she sat down. Kingsley leaned against the wall. "Dawlish was the first of ours on the scene. He didn't have much freedom to investigate, but judging by trace magic, he thinks there were at least three attackers."

Tonks couldn't think of what to say. The lift doors rattled open, there was some whispered conversation, then a gasp and a sob. Savage hurried by a moment later, looking green. Amelia Bones had been a fairminded department head, and had been respected and liked by both sides of last year's office war. Losing her was losing an island of sanity in a world gone mad.

Kingsley remained quiet, leaning against the wall, his brow furrowed. He stood up after a moment, sighing. "It's likely that You-Know... Voldemort killed her himself," he said. "Even Bellatrix wouldn't be a match for Amelia on fair terms."

"And Bellatrix is known for her fair terms..."

"We don't know who was there with You... with him. But from the evidence, it looks like she put up quite a fight. And Voldemort would consider it worthy of his time to kill the head of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement."

Tonks nodded, her mind slipping carefully onto the paths of her work. "Dawlish suspects that Bellatrix was there?"

"We all do, but why do you ask?"

She told him about Dawlish's greeting. "He's never much liked me," she said.

"Nor me." Kingsley waved a dismissive hand. "Dawlish is an idiot. And he's not going to forget that we hid Sirius. He thinks you're too soft for your family, and he thinks I've developed an unhealthy interest in them as well."

"A guess?"

"Not at all. He told me as much when I offered to help him with the case."

"I suppose I should stay away?"

"Probably. Though as of this morning, I have no authority whatsoever over you. Scrimgeour has reassigned me."

"Reassigned?"

"You wouldn't believe me if I told you," Kingsley said. "You're reporting to Savage now."

Tonks nodded, resiged. "Where is Scrimgeour in the midst of this?"

"Off telling the Daily Prophet how hard he's working to capture Madam Bones's murderer. I expect he'll be at that for at least two more hours. They say he's first in line when Fudge goes down."

"Oh, good. Any rumors on who gets his job?"

"I doubt I'm in the running after deliberately cocking up an investigation I was heading," Kingsley said. "And you're too new. Beyond that, I honestly don't care much."

"Me, either."

"Well, I suppose you know what you need to know," he said, starting to leave. He turned around and spoke more quietly. "I got an odd message from Dumbledore, about your Patronus?"

"I don't want to talk about it."

"All right." He sighed. "Well, I'd best finish clearing out my cubicle for my next assignment."

He started to walk away, and Tonks almost missed the meaning of it. He was nearly to his cubicle when she felt something sick turn over inside her. She stood too quickly, knocking her chair over and not caring, and rushed around the block of cubicles to Kingsley's.

The walls were bare.

A bit of torn parchment was still tacked to the wall with Spellotape, and a single map was stuck at a forlorn angle just above his desk. The wastepaper basket was full to overflowing, and as she stared at it, a photograph seesawed down to the floor--Sirius at Hogwarts, mugging for the camera beside James Potter and Peter Pettigrew. The photo had a huge crease down the center, and all three boys were waving their hands at it in an irritated way. She let her gaze wander up to the fanned photos sticking up from the top--Sirius screaming mad laughter as he was cornered to be taken to Azkaban, Sirius at James and Lily Potter's wedding, a shadowy figure an informant had claimed was Sirius. Maps of known locations. The corner of a picture of Sirius with James and baby Harry. She pulled this sheaf out, and another fell to the floor--Sirius and Remus, looking impossibly young, standing on the docks in a city Tonks didn't recognize, the ocean filled with white sailboats behind them. A fat elbow told her that Peter Pettigrew was standing just out of frame. Sirius and Mum as children, dressed in holiday robes, standing in the drawing room at Number Twelve, Grimmauld Place... heaven knew where Kingsley had found that, as Auntie would undoubtedly have destroyed pictures of either of them, let alone both of them. Sirius with his arm protectively around his younger brother, Regulus, standing on Platform Nine and Three Quarters.

"Tonks?"

Kingsley was squatting across from her, and she realized that she was groping on the floor for another picture.

She blinked at the handful she already had. "I'm sorry," she said. "I don't know what just got into me."

"It's all right. I should have asked if you wanted any of them. I didn't think about it." He looked at her curiously. "Are you all right, Tonks?"

"Fine." She gathered several of the better pictures and stacked them neatly. She thought Remus might want the school pictures. "I'm fine."

"No, you're not."

"If you're going to give me the answer, then why ask the question?"

"Two days in a row with brown hair, grabbing up wrinkled photographs, and a new Patronus... it's not like you."

"Are you going to put a wand in my face and accuse me of kidnapping myself and and then coming in to impersonate me at work?"

"Just to steal pictures of Sirius, apparently." He smiled faintly. "No, you're you," he said, pointing at a mirror above his desk. "We've put in four, on loan from the Department of Mysteries, Identity Division. The rest are in the Wizengamot offices and the Minister's offices. Dumbledore declined them at Hogwarts."

She gazed in, and saw nothing unusual. "True image mirrors?"

He nodded. "If you're Narcissa, you've aged very well, and the blonde color Potion is normally quite realistic." He smiled. "It's you, Tonks. And me, for that matter." He stood so she could see his reflection. "It avoids a lot of tedious cross-questioning."

"Maybe everyone should have one."

"It's absurdly complicated magic. The Identity Division didn't especially want to part with these. They were made over a hundred years ago, and no one knows how to make new ones."

"I sometimes think we're not very bright."

He smiled faintly. "I sometimes agree with you."

Tonks looked at the stack of pictures in her hand. "Do you mind if--?"

"Take any of them you'd like."

She nodded and started to leave.

"And Tonks?"

"What?"

"I think you should find someone to talk to who isn't an ill-tempered werewolf. You look like you could stand a bit of talking."

She shook her head. "You know, Kingsley, oddly enough, I've never in my life felt less like talking. Right now, I feel like working."

She left him there, getting ready for whatever his new assignment was, and ignored his advice to stay out of the Bones murder. She spent the next seven hours in a cubicle with a hostile Dawlish, analyzing the murder scene and the witness accounts, learning the last terrible moments of a good woman's life.

I feel a bit...: cranky cranky
Soundtrack: Footloose soundtrack

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moonlinnet From: moonlinnet Date: August 11th, 2005 06:29 am (UTC) (Link)
Love it! Shacklebolt is beyond cool. =)
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: August 11th, 2005 03:01 pm (UTC) (Link)
Yeah, I like Kingsley, too.
dalf From: dalf Date: August 11th, 2005 06:31 am (UTC) (Link)
I am really starting to like Kingsly a lot post HBP, which is strange since he was not even IN HBP. This sub-chapter was really good though. I like how you show Tonks and Kingsly as co-workers and as friends and the bond as both being order members. Beyond him and her he "does not much care" who takes over. But, at the same time, even as an apparently good friend, how much he does not know about her, with his "Ill tempered werewolf" comment.

It could be my mood or the music I am listening too but there I felt like this bit had an almost surreal calm about it. Maybe not surreal ... ominous? Melancholy?

I liked it a lot, the pictures were sad.
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: August 11th, 2005 03:01 pm (UTC) (Link)
I think Kingley's as isolated as she is, and while they'd be natural enough friends, their assignments are more important to them, so they don't really talk all that much about anything else.
dalf From: dalf Date: August 12th, 2005 01:11 am (UTC) (Link)
Its just I did not even think of all the order memebers we meet they are the only two aurors! Also as you have noted (and others have) showing up at the ministry in OotP with SIrius black (espically Kingsly), well .... In Shifts you had Kingsly get a bit annoyed with SIrisu over going otu and stuff. WHen I read it at first I thought of it merly in terms of Siriu's saftey but really purposly cocking up his own investigation, heh not too good. Though that was my first though reading HBP when I found out he was not pretending to be a muggle secratary.
From: psalm_27 Date: August 11th, 2005 11:26 am (UTC) (Link)
*hugs for Tonks*

Poor kid, its just going to get worse for her before it gets better, eh? I'm just heartbroken at her scrambling for the pictures, what a vivid image.

Loved Kingsley. It was nice to see how strong his affection is for Tonks. I hope that we see more of him as "someone who isn't an ill-tempered werewolf". I think he'd be a great shoulder for Tonks to lean on in the coming months.

And, whose an ill-tempered werewolf? *indignation on Remus's behalf*
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: August 11th, 2005 02:59 pm (UTC) (Link)
Since he's not in the Hogsmeade contingent, I think he won't be around much--she's lost her only friend at work, and they'd have both alienated other colleagues with the Sirius stuff the previous year.
From: psalm_27 Date: August 12th, 2005 02:11 am (UTC) (Link)
Since he's not in the Hogsmeade contingent, I think he won't be around much

I'm sure he could apparate in for a good heart-to-heart every once in a while, couldn't he? ;-)
author_by_night From: author_by_night Date: August 11th, 2005 11:52 am (UTC) (Link)
Poor Tonks...

I really, really do wish I could come up with more intelligent replies.
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: August 11th, 2005 02:58 pm (UTC) (Link)
"Poor Tonks" works just fine. :)
From: jennygreenhill Date: August 11th, 2005 02:00 pm (UTC) (Link)
I think you might be the only writer I know of who creates convincing 'Non-Harry-Perspective' fiction (does that make sense?) You make the supporting characters just as real as Harry or any other main character.

I just thought I'd say that, because it's pretty darn impressive
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: August 11th, 2005 02:58 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks. :)

I enjoy alternate POV writing. It's just a different way to look at events.
From: (Anonymous) Date: August 11th, 2005 02:27 pm (UTC) (Link)
Been meaning to say this for a while but -

Bliss, bliss, bliss, bliss, bliss! I LOVE having HP fic to read by you!

That said, looks like Dora's in for a rough year. Same for Remus. I've been thinking about it, and there's one thing that makes Remus being a spy very hard for him. He's got a great deal of empathy and an ability to see from others' POV, even when that POV sees him pretty negatively. In part, I think this is why he's been able to be forgiving instead of bitter with a lot of the hardships life has thrown him.

However, in dealing with someone like Fenrir, it's got to hurt. Fenrir's kind of the anti-Lupin (or that's the picture I'm getting). Remus has been a mentor and an emotional support to a lot of kids. Fenrir wants to be a mentor and emotional focus for kids he's deliberately isolated from others. The thing is, he wouldn't admit to there being a difference between him and Remus except that he probably classifies Remus (post joining the pack) as trying to be these things in a self-righteous, Uncle Tom sort of way.

Normally, Remus could deal with that, but having to deal with Fenrir on a regular basis and pretending to accept his POV, that's got to be corrosive, especially as so much of this has got to fall close to fears Remus has just dealt with. Fenrir saw Tonks and saw a vulnerable kid they could exploit. Remus had to agree and go one further, claiming to have already exploited her. On some level, Remus has got to start wondering if he isn't just what Fenrir claims he is and being disgusted with that self-image.

One thing I have to say for Snape as a spy, he's capable of keeping his core self or his core image of himself intact regardless of what roles he adopts or how others react to him. Since I see that as part of his keeping his emotional distance from others - and since I normally admire Remus' empathy - I'm surprised to find myself wishing Remus had more of that quality. Without it, I'm afraid he's going to go through an emotional meatgrinder, and he'll be taking Tonks along with him.
From: (Anonymous) Date: August 11th, 2005 02:29 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oops, and this is Ellen. I'm always forgetting to sign things.
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: August 11th, 2005 02:57 pm (UTC) (Link)
Heh, you've pretty much hit the character arc I have in mind for Remus during the year. ;)

Remus would certainly be served well by an ability to lie better. One thing I noticed in the book is that he's supposed to be undercover and trying to fool the werewolves, yet he mentions to Harry that his "own particular kind of reasoned argument" isn't going over well. Er, Remus? You're supposed to be spying, not recruiting. But I think he wouldn't be able to help himself.
From: cristix Date: August 11th, 2005 04:13 pm (UTC) (Link)
I think there are more than just one reason why Remus finds so hard to spy on the werewolves.

It is also the fact that he has to live near the person who made him a werewolf, who ruined his life.

And it is also the fact that he has to see the life he might have had, if he hadn't had DD's help.

Which, taking into consideration how insecure he is, must be quite devastating.

I think it is much more a question of poor Remus than of poor Tonks. Can you tell that I am obsessed with Remus? :)

aND i am not sure I agree with the statement that Remus is only supossed to spy on the werewolves. I think it is part of his job to try to convince the werewolves to go on DD's side. Any quote from HBP to make you think otherwise?
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: August 11th, 2005 04:22 pm (UTC) (Link)
He says that he's supposed to go and spy on them, and has to try to fit in among them, and that it's difficult because he can't seem to shake the habits of life among wizards. Bless Remus, but I don't think he'll survive two months without deciding that the young werewolves really need to learn to read. There will definitely be conflicts between him and Fenrir, and that's not going to make it easy for him to gather information or earn the trust of the pack.
super_pan From: super_pan Date: August 11th, 2005 02:36 pm (UTC) (Link)
This short chapter was awesome! For anyone who didn't buy Sad Tonks in HBP, this should make it clear why an upbeat young women can get so low. And alas, poor Tonks; there is so much worse to come. I really enjoy your insight into these characters. Now it seems obvious to me that Kingsley's reassignment would have an impact on Tonks. She will miss his support, and the connection to Sirius. In such a small piece, you introduced a gajillion reasons for Tonks to be depressed. And while your Tonks has always been believable and likable, now with POV treatment, she is becoming a real live person. Again, awesome.
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: August 11th, 2005 03:02 pm (UTC) (Link)
There are tons of things affecting her this year, and to top it off, she is a Black, and, while they're not at Gaunt levels of instability, they're never going to be, in the immortal words of Buffy, on the cover of Sanity Fair. They've got some emotional iffiness about them.
super_pan From: super_pan Date: August 11th, 2005 03:13 pm (UTC) (Link)

Sanity Fair!

You're right about the Black instability! I bet Tonks has a stronger mental constitution, though, because she's got Muggle stock. Not as much inbreeding.
persephone_kore From: persephone_kore Date: August 11th, 2005 05:17 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Sanity Fair!

Heh. Apparently mixing in one Muggle or Muggle-born can have a fairly dramatic effect -- of course, with Voldemort it just made him bright enough and handsome enough to be more dangerous when he discarded or failed to absorb any interest in morality.
super_pan From: super_pan Date: August 11th, 2005 06:25 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Sanity Fair!

Yeah, Voldemort doesn't make a good example for my mixed heritage agenda, does he?
persephone_kore From: persephone_kore Date: August 11th, 2005 07:08 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Sanity Fair!

I don't know about that. Voldemort is established beyond doubt as having gained a, ah, cosmetic advantage over his mother's side of the family; I wouldn't be surprised if the Riddle genetics mitigated some other physiological effects. (Come to that... this isn't something I've looked into, but is it possible that Merope might have had trouble giving birth even with the best of conditions and wizarding medicine? I know there's... rather a variety of problems and potential problems in some dog breeds, though I'm not sure which are the result of excessive inbreeding and which are direct consequences of traits being bred for.)

Magic is a bit harder to tell; JKR has set it up so that it is actually completely reasonable to expect magic to run in families, even down to particular talents and power levels -- but also so that it can randomly pop up out of nowhere, disappear, or vary in level. (For some reason, however, it cracks me up that there actually are pureblood Grangers. I have this image of some genetically-aware but socially cautious loon trying to woo Hermione away from Ron: "Come on! Marry me! We can pretend you're an obscure cousin." "...Please go away or I will injure you.") We can't be entirely sure that Voldemort is intrinsically more powerful or talented than the Gaunts -- he overpowered Morfin, but that also had to do with confidence, intelligence, training, and the element of surprise. It looks as if he is, though.

It doesn't appear to have made him actually healthy, mentally, but one can't have everything. Personally I think I'd find Voldemort spookier if he had a conscience and defeated it than if he never had one, but perhaps (as I think Fern has suggested) Rowling's goal was to avoid making him interesting.
super_pan From: super_pan Date: August 12th, 2005 02:15 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Sanity Fair!

Yeah, actually in some ways he was not too interesting, until HBP that is. Voldemort is just a typical serial killer, but with a wand. But the crazy evil magical stuff he did to his soul, I think, ups the creep factor.
persephone_kore From: persephone_kore Date: August 12th, 2005 05:25 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Sanity Fair!

Actually, I thought he became less interesting with HBP. Based on CoS, I had the impression that he was meant to be Harry's mirror and a case of wasted potential -- that the similarities to Harry's circumstances and talents and the slight similarity in looks were meant to suggest that Harry's arch-nemesis had once been rather like him -- that like Harry, Tom Riddle had had both good and evil impulses, but unlike Harry, he had opted for the path that was self-serving through cruelty.

As Fern has pointed out, however, Dumbledore said that our choices show our true natures, not that they make or develop our true natures -- and it appears that in fact JKR is going for the idea that Tom Riddle never had a better nature to reject, defeat, or fail to cultivate, whereas Harry's better nature is so strong as to have survived ten years of no encouragement whatsoever.

So, basically, I was wrong; I thought he was meant to be more interesting than he was -- a tragedy of sorts, brought down from what-might-have-been by his own flaws, something to be seen as what Harry must avoid in himself. Oops. A few magic tricks modified from fairy-tale classics -- while a cool idea for the story, don't get me wrong -- don't exactly make up the interest level. *wry grin*
super_pan From: super_pan Date: August 13th, 2005 07:48 am (UTC) (Link)

Re: Sanity Fair!

Actually, it may have been more complex to show that Both Voldemort and Harry actually chose their paths, as opposed to destiny and predisposition, but, it does seem that JKR implies that they in fact, had no choice. Voldemort is EVIL. Harry is GOOD. And I think that is why Snape hates Harry so much. Because Snape lives in the world dictated by one's choices, and not DESTINY. Everything will always be, in a way, easy for Harry and Voldemort, because all they have to do is oppose each other. But the ones in between are the more complex, interesting characters, with the diffucult choices. My point is, I think I agree with you that Voldemort is not very multifaceted.
persephone_kore From: persephone_kore Date: August 13th, 2005 08:15 am (UTC) (Link)

Re: Sanity Fair!

Eh. To be fair, JKR seems to posit that it is the essential nature that makes the choices, not that there are no choices to make, and considering the whole business of magical ability being inborn, it's not as if I ever thought she was denying the effect of things outside the individual's control. Harry has a choice -- choices -- and really needs to make one about not using the blasted Cruciatus curse. :P Caring is his strength but carries along with it an equally passionate temper that could be a serious problem if he doesn't learn to reject cruelty as an outlet. Voldemort would in theory have moral choices to make, presumably, but unlike Harry doesn't ever appear to have considered the other side.
super_pan From: super_pan Date: August 13th, 2005 01:46 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Sanity Fair! (Cruciatus)

OMG! I totally wish that Harry would quit using UNFORGIVABLE CURSES! Aren't using these curses grounds for going to Azkaban? Harry should feel some guilt, or regret. Something. Oh, if only a certain someone was alive to lecture Harry about torturing people.
From: (Anonymous) Date: August 11th, 2005 03:25 pm (UTC) (Link)
Another wonderful installment. I'm impressed with how you worked in the Bones' murder and the effects it would have on everyone at Auror headquarters. Very effective scenes with Kingsley and the addition of the photographs -- just lovely. I also like how you've set it up for Tonks to talk to Molly as in HBP. What a nice chapter!

On a related topic, this has got me wanting to re-read Shifts. Last time I read it on LJ. Which version is the "final" version--the one on HB or on SQ? Thanks!!! Mary
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: August 11th, 2005 03:32 pm (UTC) (Link)
SQ is the polished version. :)
thunderemerald From: thunderemerald Date: August 11th, 2005 03:26 pm (UTC) (Link)
Footloose soundtrack, huh? Heehee... er, anyway.

I have a feeling I'm going to miss having Remus in this story as much as the last one -- but I'll live, because I can't wait to see where you'll end up going with your take on their relationship.

"Ill-tempered werewolf"? Where the heck is Kingsley getting THAT impression from? For heaven's sake. :)
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: August 11th, 2005 03:46 pm (UTC) (Link)
Holdin' out for a hero 'til the end of the night... he's gotta be strong, and he's gotta be fast, and he's...

Er, yeah. An ill-tempered werewolf. ;)

G-d knows where Kingsley got that from; I don't.
thunderemerald From: thunderemerald Date: August 11th, 2005 03:54 pm (UTC) (Link)
*sings* He's gotta be strong, and he's gotta be fast, and he's gotta turn into a wolf once a month...

To Kingsley, I says, you assume too much. So shove it. ;)
doomandnachos From: doomandnachos Date: August 11th, 2005 04:13 pm (UTC) (Link)
Regarding Tonks and the photos, you have done more in a single scene to make me believe in angsty!Tonks than all of HBP did. A lovely scene, and one that nicely parallels the "by-the-by" approach to Sirius' death in canon.
izhilzha From: izhilzha Date: August 11th, 2005 05:11 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh, the pictures.... Wow. What a terribly evocative moment. *hugs Tonks*

I love Kingsley's off-hand reference to his new assignment. Heh. I wonder exactly how many members of the Order are undercover (in some capacity) this year, anyway?
kismeteve From: kismeteve Date: August 11th, 2005 05:21 pm (UTC) (Link)
I loved this chapter. I'm a big fan of Kingsley despite his lack of lines and actual plot, so this was a great read. There isn't nearly enough fic out there that deals with the fact that Tonks is basically in the FBI/MI5 of the wizarding world and I love how you showed the stress it can cause. As isolated as Kinglsey is, Tonks is even more so.
simibee From: simibee Date: August 11th, 2005 10:09 pm (UTC) (Link)
Your Tonks is my favorite! She's actually believable as canon... unlike some others... ANd you make her mental state in HBP quite understandable.

ahhh so good, even of if it is sad...
lorelei_lynn From: lorelei_lynn Date: August 11th, 2005 10:54 pm (UTC) (Link)
Loved the image of Tonks sorting through the photos. No wonder she's looking mousy - Sirius' death, disgrace at work, and the Remus situation would be more than enough to do that to anyone.
From: (Anonymous) Date: August 13th, 2005 01:47 pm (UTC) (Link)
A very good start! I have to echo that I like Kingsley here. He's one of JKR's throwaway chaacters (at least for now) but there has to be more to him or else he wouldn't have joined the order. I can even understand the "ill-tempered werewolf" comment and it is good to see an outsider's view on a well-loved character from time to time.

I have to admit, that although I loved "Shifts", I thought that your Remus and Dora weren't really robust enough. However, HBP has proved you right and me wrong (not really surprising) and your interpretation fits canon perfectly! All those self-doubts of Remus' and the analysis of his own motives fit with the break-up so well.

I am glad to see a Tonks' pov this time. I've never thought her a one-dimensional character and I fully expect you to show her in-depth.

Thanks very much for getting started on this so quickly!

From TDU
From: (Anonymous) Date: August 13th, 2005 05:10 pm (UTC) (Link)

wonderful fics!

I've been lurking in various forums reading Lupin-Tonks threads. I missed the ship when reading OOP but loved the way JKR handled it in HBP. Anyway, I found your story "Shifts" by following links and read it last weekend and loved it. I thought, as I read it, that it would need only a little bit of tweaking to be completely consistent with canon. I see that you're already addressing some of those points (black hair vs mouse-colored brown; engagement vs breakup). Anyway, last night I found this site and have starting reading "Shades". Again, wonderful! I really like the way you wrote about the changed Patronus and Lupin's reaction. Also, as others have said, the photos of Sirius on the floor was very touching.

I'll be following this story with interest and pleasure. Thanks for sharing with us.

Maureen
olympe_maxime From: olympe_maxime Date: August 13th, 2005 07:21 pm (UTC) (Link)
Ah, Kingsley. This is a man I could actually love, and live with. As opposed to Lupin, whom I love like mad, but whose thickheadedness I doubt I have the patience for.

And those photographs were perfect - a brilliant, hearwrenching way to let us in on Tonks's grief about Sirius.

Interesting that Tonks thinks of herself as Tonks and not Dora. Is that a decision based on HBP, or did your Dora Tonks begin to do that after she grew up from "Your Very Own Dora"?
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: August 13th, 2005 08:00 pm (UTC) (Link)
I have her start to be called "Tonks" when she goes to Hogwarts, where there's another Dora in her year (her friend Maddie is actually Dora Madrigan), and at some point, she just makes the mental shift to being "Tonks." In her POV through Shifts, she was Tonks, though in Remus's, she's Dora. I can't imagine how one ends up thinking of oneself by surname only, especially when one's parents, who share the name, are around... but as she's insistent on the subject, I suppose she must. It's my sincere hope that she starts using her actual name at some point in book 7.
olympe_maxime From: olympe_maxime Date: August 13th, 2005 08:32 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh, right, I'd forgotten about that scene with Maddie and Tonks and Sanjiv and all where they decide to go with the surname for both girls. Yeah, it's still weird. It's hard enough for me to get used to people calling me 'Ms (Surname)'; back home in India they suffix 'Ms' (and 'Mr' and 'Mrs') with a person's first name rather than his/her surname. Just a local oddity.
humantales From: humantales Date: August 16th, 2005 09:36 pm (UTC) (Link)
And off Kingsley goes, stage left. Do we get to see more of him in your story?

I felt for Tonks all through HBP and your story doesn't look to be changing that at all. Looking forward to part 3 or chapter 3.
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