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Teddy Lupin and the Hunter's Moon, Chapter 20: The Clabberts' Alarm, pt. 3 - The Phantom Librarian
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Teddy Lupin and the Hunter's Moon, Chapter 20: The Clabberts' Alarm, pt. 3
This'll teach me to come home and sleep for three hours after leaving a meme up when I owe writing! :P

Anyway, everything is pretty easygoing and normal. One of the Clabberts is pregnant. All the kids are talking about how to listen to the baby clabbert's heartbeat when suddenly the pustules glow red, and Teddy looks toward the Whomping Willow and orders his classmates into Hagrid's house, as someone is coming.

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A figure shimmered into view beneath the Whomping Willow, but before the branches could take aim, it burst forward in a stream of light. As it came closer, Teddy could see that it was a female shape, then she was in front of them.

Mathilde Dubois smiled. Her teeth had been filed to neat points, but she was otherwise unmarked (at least anywhere that Teddy could see). She was tall and thin, with high cheekbones and dark eyes. She'd dyed her hair a uniform black with no highlights, and cut it sharply across her forehead and under her ears. She looked like pictures Teddy had seen of women in the nineteen-twenties. Even her robes, fashionable and thigh-length, contributed to it. Her lips were painted a bright, cruel red. "'ello," she said.

Vivian grabbed Teddy's arm and dragged him behind her, then raised her wand. "You have no right to be here," she said. "It's my territory."

"Territory," Mathilde said, "is for ze 'olding." With an irritated flick of her hand--Teddy could now see that she was carrying an unusually thin light-colored wand--she disarmed Vivian.

A Patronus flew over Teddy's head, toward the castle, and Hagrid thundered forward. "Yeh get out!"

Mathilde made another contemptuous gesture with her wand, and Hagrid was bound in iron chains. A second flick made a row of bars appear, blocking off the rest of the class. She took one look to see that they were secure, then pleasantly said, "Zis is ze Lupin boy, is it not?" She tried to reach around Vivian, but Vivian moved backward violently, taking Teddy with her. Mathilde looked at her with feigned disappointment. "Oh, but 'e is so pretty."

"Touch him, you'll die," Vivian said.

Vivian's arm went stiff, and Mathilde put her hand under it. She stroked Teddy's arm. "And yet," she said, "steel living."

Teddy yanked his arm back. He tried to get around Vivian to attack, but she wasn't completely Petrified, and wouldn't let him.

"What's ze matter?" Mathilde asked. "You don't like girls? Per'aps Fenrir should come next time, you would like 'im better, no?"

"I like girls," Teddy said. "But I don't like killers." He tried again to get around Vivian, and she shifted back. Far up near the castle, Teddy saw Uncle Harry running across the grounds. He sent his Patronus, and a moment later, the greenhouse door burst open and Professor Longbottom came out, shutting his first years in with a blast of his wand.

Mathilde sighed. "What a shame," she said. "We shall 'ave to 'urry. And 'ere I wanted a nice, long talk."

"You're not taking Teddy anywhere," Vivian told her.

Mathilde looked up with vague interest. "No, no. Of course not. Not yet. 'E weel come for ze boy one day, but I 'ave come for my seester." She touched Vivian's frozen arm tenderly. "Fenrir was so 'appy to learn you were alive after all. 'E 'as so looked forward to seeing you again."

"No!" Teddy said. He shoved Vivian off to the side and drew his wand, holding it tightly against a Disarming Spell, just as Uncle Harry had taught him, but the concentration on holding onto it was too much to actually do a spell of his own.

Mathilde put her arms around Vivian, smiled sweetly, then burst into a cloud of fine, sparkling points, taking Vivian with her. As Professor Longbottom and Uncle Harry thundered into the paddock, the cloud swirled into the sky and was gone.

"Vivian!" Professor Longbottom yelled. He raised his wand, and an arc of lightning split the gray March sky, followed by a crack of thunder that made Teddy's ears ring.

Uncle Harry was doing something Teddy didn't understand, muttering and tracing his wand in an arcane pattern. Whatever it was didn't seem to work; he looked down, grinding his teeth and went to Hagrid, Vanishing Mathilde's chains, then the bars she'd used to trap the rest of the class.

"I'm sorry," Hagrid said. "She was fast. An' I was always rubbish at wand work."

"It's all right," Uncle Harry told him, then looked up at the students. "Is anyone hurt?"

Professor Longbottom turned on them, his eyes blazing. Teddy knew that he'd got close to Vivian, but the rest of the class seemed very confused. "What's the matter with the lot of you?" he asked. "Why is Teddy the only one with his wand drawn?"

Teddy fought to keep his jaw from dropping. He'd never in his life seen Neville Longbottom lose his temper, least of all at students. "It happened really fast, and she was ready for Hagrid. They couldn't have done anything."

"Professor Longbottom," Uncle Harry said calmly, "perhaps you should get the Headmistress while I talk to the students."

Professor Longbottom looked mutinous for a moment, then seemed to come to his senses. He mumbled something Teddy didn't catch and strode up toward the castle.

Corky was the first to come out of the shadow of Hagrid's hut, spooked and looking as small as a first year, even though he was now easily the biggest in Teddy's year. "She just showed up from nowhere," he said.

"Where?" Uncle Harry asked.

"Under the Whomping Willow," Teddy told him. "Then she used one of those Streaming Spells to get here fast."

"I think I know what I'm working on next," Uncle Harry said. "Tell me about when she appeared."

Tinny stepped forward, putting her hand on the female Clabbert's head. "We were just having a class," she said. "And then something flashed near the tree, and she came. Teddy yelled at us to get into the house, then Vivian got in front of Teddy, then Hagrid sent for you, and she--the woman, that is--put the chains on him."

"I want each of you to tell me about the flash you saw when she first showed up, and where you first spotted her," Uncle Harry said.

Each of the students, Teddy included, gave the same account as Tinny. It had all happened too fast to see details. Uncle Harry suggested half-heartedly that he might use the Pensieve, but he didn't seem to think he'd spot much more.

"Professor Hagrid," he said, "may I use your fire?"

Hagrid nodded. "Can the students go back?"

"Wait until I'm finished. I'll stay here with Teddy then, and you can walk them back." Uncle Harry went inside.

Donzo was looking thoughtfully up at the castle. "Is Professor Longbottom all right?"

"He's fine," Teddy said.

Donzo nodded, but looked like he'd put together a piece or two of the puzzle, even without Teddy's knowledge of Christmas. Teddy wanted to tell him not to say anything, but to do it, he'd have to say something himself. He'd just have to hope that Donzo would have the sense to keep it to himself.

Uncle Harry came out and sent Hagrid off with the class, and a moment later, Professor Sprout appeared. She'd sent Professor Longbottom to let his first years out of the greenhouses and take them back to the castle. "He'll join us when he's got them safely there, and apologized to Hagrid's students. I never would have thought it of Ne-"--she realized Teddy was still there--"Professor Longbottom."

"I've asked Ron to bring Hermione and get her through the gate," Uncle Harry said. "We need new protection spells, and we need them now."

Professor Sprout agreed and smiled tightly. "Er, Mr. Potter, oughtn't Mr. Lupin be with his classmates?"

"Teddy's in thick of this," Uncle Harry said. "There's also a particular possibility I'd like to talk to him about."

"What?" Teddy asked.

Uncle Harry sighed and looked at the Whomping Willow. "I'm thinking of where she appeared. Why at the Whomping Willow?"

Teddy couldn't think of any reason.

"You think she came up through the tunnel?" Professor Sprout said.

"I'm hoping so," Uncle Harry said. "If so, then we'll just need to secure the tunnel better. I know she can't get into the Shrieking Shack, but if she was able to Apparate into the tunnel, she could have crawled up, Disillusioned, then just put on a light show to make it look like she'd broken security."

Professor Sprout nodded. "I fervently hope that's the case, Mr. Potter. Although I don't see where it concerns Mr. Lupin."

"Mr. Lupin owns the house on the far side of the tunnel, and I'd like to get his permission to expand the security charms through the whole passage."

"Er... sure," Teddy said.

"It may require some special equipment," Uncle Harry said, raising his eyebrow. "Do you solemnly swear that you don't mind?"

"Oh!" Teddy said. "No, not all. I mean, yes, I swear, I don't mind. I have some parchment in my bag. You can write down what you mean to do and give it back later." He fished in his book bag for the blank Marauder's Map, and handed it over.

"I'll have it back to you tonight," Uncle Harry said. He looked up and smiled, raising his arm in greeting. Ron and Hermione were coming from the gate.

Professor Sprout looked irritated. "I'm not entirely sure what just happened, but don't imagine that I believe that you just had a conversation about a spare piece of parchment."

Hermione reached the paddock a few steps ahead of Ron and smiled wearily. "Hello, Teddy. How are you?"

"Fine. But Vivian's gone."

"I know. Harry told me."

"Mr. Potter." Professor Sprout looked significantly at Teddy.

Uncle Harry frowned at Teddy thoughtfully, then said, "Professor Sprout, I'd like Teddy to stay. He's the only student against whom there is a direct, voiced threat. I'd like him to know what security is going to be available to him. We may think of something that we can teach him immediately."

She didn't look happy, but resigned herself to it.

The group settled into Hagrid's hut, and a few minutes later, Hagrid and Professor Longbottom arrived. Ron had taken the opportunity to bring in a great deal of food from home, which he said was just something of a gift, since they were all imposing on Hagrid's hospitality. Hagrid wasn't given any reason to offer anyone food.

Most of the talk was over Teddy's head magically. Hermione was pulling book after book from her old Hogwarts book bag, which she'd converted into a portable library (Teddy had been allowed to browse the shelves once; they were much more neatly organized than Madam Pince's). They were going to use several archaic protection spells that Mathilde might not recognize quickly, and of course, secure the tunnel. As to Vivian, there would be a search, of course.

But no one seemed hopeful about it.
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marikenobi From: marikenobi Date: December 1st, 2007 06:36 am (UTC) (Link)
Oh no! Vivian!!!!!!
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 06:51 am (UTC) (Link)
Yeah... she's in trouble.
etain_antrim From: etain_antrim Date: December 1st, 2007 06:40 am (UTC) (Link)
Oh no! Not Vivian! Fern, now you've left me worried about her as well as Teddy. Darn it, I really like Vivian.
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 06:51 am (UTC) (Link)
I like her, too, in her way.
lollapulizer From: lollapulizer Date: December 1st, 2007 06:41 am (UTC) (Link)
Oh dear. Poor Vivian. And you know Greyback will punish her for leaving. And she's now old enough for him to "visit." Ick. I just don't want to think about all the horrible things that could be happening to her.

DuBois was really creepy. Especially since she seemed to know so much. It makes me wonder how she would fair against someone who got a full Hogwarts education, not just a partial one (like Hagrid) or none at all (like Vivian).

And points to Harry for keeping Teddy in the loop (even if he doesn't really understand). I liked their Map-language and Sprout's reaction to it.
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 06:52 am (UTC) (Link)
Sprout's not quite dumb enough to miss the complex code they were using, she just was missing the basic ingredient to know what was being code-talked about.
megan29 From: megan29 Date: December 1st, 2007 06:47 am (UTC) (Link)
Oh, dear, poor Vivian - and poor Neville. Didn't see that one coming! Were you planning it all along? I seem to remember that you complained about needing more material to fill out several months of Teddy's school year. I'd say this more than qualifies.

And frankly, I agree with Neville: what was wrong with that class, to just sit stupidly around and not attack? "In my time, things were different. The youth of today, they don't know how to fight anymore. They have it too easy, and they're weak, that's the problem. " Kidding. But I liked seeing him lose his temper, as he was just a bit too perfect before.
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 06:54 am (UTC) (Link)
In my day, we had to fight Death Eaters. Uphill. Without wands!

My original thought was that the bars had been hexed not to allow magic through, but I'm not sure that's necessary. It's easy to stun people into not acting for a minute or two, if they're not used to danger. Deer in the headlights syndrome. I don't think they'll be making that mistake again.
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From: kobegrace Date: December 1st, 2007 06:47 am (UTC) (Link)
1. Like, oh, my god, Fern.

2. Poor Neville... he must be -- a whole lotta shit must be going through his mind. Poor... poor him.

3. You're going to do something to Vivian, something you said you'd wanted to do originally. If only you understood how much the lot of us are dreading what plans you have for her. (Sigh...)

4. The character of Mathilde Dubois has such sinister imagery. So very dark-dominatrix-Bella-y. But one day, Fern, one day, the literary world will be faced with an extraordinary super-villain, the likes of which no one has ever seen. She will wear tan corduroy, have plaits in her hair, and don pink Hello Kitty shirts. She will chew bubblegum. She will have a pet rabbit.

5. I loved this. Can't wait for the next bit.

fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 06:56 am (UTC) (Link)
4. Well, Mathilde's going out of her way to look like a stereotypical villain. She's just a teenage goth girl out of control, really. Which means that out of "costume," she probably is kind of geeky. But she'd eat the pet bunny just prove she was really dark...
From: (Anonymous) Date: December 1st, 2007 06:48 am (UTC) (Link)
Thank goodness for Evil Overlord mistake #... "Don't grandstand, seize your main target and kill him/her/it as quickly and efficiently as possible." Harry would be dead if Voldemort wasn't guilty of it and I guess Teddy is still with us because of it, too. Poor Vivian, though, is this the result of JKR's Hannah Abbott revelation? I've been worried ever since Alderman, Blondin, Vivian (and others) gave their interview to Honoria that Grayback would be looking for their sanctuary and attacking it. Now I'm sure of it. Poor, poor Vivian....

Another great installment. I feel like I'm sitting up waiting for my bedtime story.

fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 06:57 am (UTC) (Link)
If the Evil Overlords of the world ever get their hands on that list, we'll never defeat them...
allie_meril From: allie_meril Date: December 1st, 2007 06:52 am (UTC) (Link)
*yelps* Vivian, oh no! I'm very worried about her...

Mathilde is a scary bitch. :-/ 'm not liking her one bit. And the whole doom of "Oh, Fen's going to come and get you himself."
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 06:58 am (UTC) (Link)
If it had occurred to her, she'd probably be calling him "Fenny." Which would at least take her out of everyone else's hair, as Greyback would take care of the problem.
anj1290 From: anj1290 Date: December 1st, 2007 06:52 am (UTC) (Link)
So, please say that you're not going to make Neville/Vivian canon-compatible by killing her off early in the romance...:-P Neville losing his temper would scare me. And Mathilde creeps me out. I really like this section, especially since we get another example of how Harry's wise enough not to leave Teddy out of things that concern him. And I would pay big money (well, if I wasn't completely broke :-P) for Hermione's portable library. Great job as usual.
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 07:00 am (UTC) (Link)
I want Hermione's library, too. Also her beaded bag from TDH.

Neville losing his temper is scary.
darth_pipes From: darth_pipes Date: December 1st, 2007 06:56 am (UTC) (Link)
Poor Vivian! I certainly hope she turns out all right. I can think of fewer things more unpleasant then tea with Fenrir.

Good, exciting character. You introduced Dubois very well here.

fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 07:01 am (UTC) (Link)
(I'm just remembering in Shades, Tonks coming up with an image of Fenrir having tea with Narcissa, with little bows in his hair. It's late enough at night that I've got the giggles at the picture.)

I figured it was time to introduce Dubois.
jedi_chick From: jedi_chick Date: December 1st, 2007 07:12 am (UTC) (Link)
Oh no, not Vivian! And poor Neville! I don't blame him for losing his temper, though it sounds like it would be a very scary sight (which makes sense, as Neville is made of awesomeness, so his anger would be very awesome too ;~)).

I liked Harry and Teddy's Super Secret Marauder code, and that Ron was smart enough to bring food from home. They're dealing with a bad situation; no use adding Hagrid's horrible cooking into the mix!

That last line is very foreboding for poor Vivian...
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 02:43 pm (UTC) (Link)
They're dealing with a bad situation; no use adding Hagrid's horrible cooking into the mix!

An important and often-overlooked observation.
prelud From: prelud Date: December 1st, 2007 07:18 am (UTC) (Link)
Please, don`t kill Vivian. Pleasepleaseplease. :((((
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 02:44 pm (UTC) (Link)
I'm honestly not sure how this is going to turn out.
miss_polyhymnia From: miss_polyhymnia Date: December 1st, 2007 07:32 am (UTC) (Link)
Ack! Fern! How can you do this to us? I had this horrible feeling after I read yesterday's segment that something was going to happen to Vivian. If I beg you not to kill her, will it make any difference? It would seem too much like letting Greyback win, after she was rescued from him years ago...
And poor Neville! *sniff*
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 02:47 pm (UTC) (Link)
I'm really not sure. I had one thing planned, then JKR made me plan a different thing, and now the different thing isn't falling into place. So I'll find out only a little bit before you do, I think.
sonetka From: sonetka Date: December 1st, 2007 07:56 am (UTC) (Link)
Oh NO, am seriously freaking out about Vivian; "Greyback foaming at the mouth re betrayal" is not a scenario anyone should face. Fie upon JKR for jossing this pairing. Nothing against Hannah Abbott, but she's just so ... meh.
sonetka From: sonetka Date: December 1st, 2007 07:57 am (UTC) (Link)
The Neville/Vivian pairing, I mean - wasn't trying to imply that Greyback/Vivian were a OTP or anything.
rdprice29 From: rdprice29 Date: December 1st, 2007 01:22 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh, poor, poor Vivian. :(

And Go Neville! Wow, what a way for him to lose his composure.

which she'd converted into a portable library (Teddy had been allowed to browse the shelves once; they were much more neatly organized than Madam Pince's). With Hermione's success with her beaded bag in DH, this is the next natural progression for her, of course. LOL! Awesome.

Great chapter (I know each post isn't a whole chapter, but I don't know what else to call them...'post' or 'section' sounds too impersonal somehow.) Anyhow, great job!
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 02:56 pm (UTC) (Link)
I loved that beaded bag. I'll bet the Romp is full of useful Hermione spell-work that the kids don't even realize isn't in every wizarding house.
From: (Anonymous) Date: December 1st, 2007 02:01 pm (UTC) (Link)
augh! *resumes gnawing on desk*
Poor Vivian! And poor Neville! No wonder that he lost his temper - quite apart from worrying about Vivian, as a former DA member and even leader...

And Mathilde is CREEPY!

~Hermione Stranger~
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 03:10 pm (UTC) (Link)
It's probably a little difficult for Neville to remember that these are kids who largely grew up sheltered, with the danger in the distant past. Even before he emerged from his cocoon as full fledged awesome, he had his parents to remind him that the world wasn't a safe place. It's not just Teddy's only-Gryffindor status that's behind him being the only one to draw his wand.
redlily From: redlily Date: December 1st, 2007 02:08 pm (UTC) (Link)
I was very much like, "Gasp! 'Sister'?!?" But as no one else has remarked on it, she must have meant it in a metaphorical sense. *sigh* My literal brain runs off again in the wrong direction.

Well, crap. I don't think Fenny's going to have her for tea. Unless we mean "have" in the creepier sense. Or the even creepier sense.
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 03:17 pm (UTC) (Link)
She thinks of all pack members as her brothers and sisters. Though Vivian is not in the least bit interested in the sorority.

willowbough From: willowbough Date: December 1st, 2007 02:15 pm (UTC) (Link)
::shivers:: Crossing my fingers for Vivian in what I hope isn't a vain hope for her survival. And poor Neville--what a way to lose somebody! It was interesting to be reminded that he's got a temper himself, although it takes a lot to make him lose it. I am surprised that more of the students didn't at least go for their wands, even if no one succeeded in getting off a shot at Mathilde. Nice job on the creepy bint, by the way--she's as squicky as Bellatrix in her way, though less overtly maniacal.
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 03:21 pm (UTC) (Link)
Yeah, the students ended up with a slightly more epic fail than I meant, since Neville's criticism, while angry, was valid. I'd mostly just intended to shunt them offstage so I wouldn't be cluttering the scene with spells and counterspells. Maybe I'll have the bars have been hexed with an Apathy Curse or something.
carlinpaddy From: carlinpaddy Date: December 1st, 2007 02:18 pm (UTC) (Link)

Vivian's death

I really don't want to see Vivian die either, but I can't help thinking "There are worse things than death," and as we're dealing with Fenny, I'm sure death would be happier.... :`( I know my grandma says it's because I watch to many scary movies and read scary stuff, but I have always been on gaurd, why weren't these twirps? And I seriously hope Vivian puts Frenchy into a comatose and excapes! hehe, that would be fun, Poor fenny losing another playtoy. Especially as this one is useful.
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 04:09 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Vivian's death

Poor fenny losing another playtoy.
He's losing them by the bushel-full in this story. He continues his stellar record in improving the lives of werewolves everywhere.
ada_the_mental From: ada_the_mental Date: December 1st, 2007 02:28 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh,not Vivian! I can't help thinking what that phsycopath will do to her... And I'm not talking about just killing her...:(
I blame Hannah!Grrr!

Nice touch, Neville losing it. Poor thing...

Sprout is not so keen with Harry doing his thing in her school, is she?

Oh,Portable Library, FTW! That's so Hermione!

fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 09:10 pm (UTC) (Link)
Sprout is definitely Old Guard. Also, I think she's testy that there's YET ANOTHER threat to Hogwarts, which isn't altogether fair after dealing with Voldemort.
From: smishli Date: December 1st, 2007 03:01 pm (UTC) (Link)
Nooooooo Vivian!!!!

I was kind of expecting it, though, but still. Poor Neville. And poor Vivian...I don't even want to think about what she must be going through with Fenrir.

I was frustrated with the other students too, but I can't really blame their inaction. They've been raised in peace time where problems get solved by adults, after all. Can't say the same for Harry's gen, obviously, so I think reading the series I just got used to outstanding acts of bravery all around from youngsters. But I have a feeling this class will have learned their lesson!

And Hermione's portable library is SO fantastic and SO her.
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 09:19 pm (UTC) (Link)
I can't really blame their inaction. They've been raised in peace time where problems get solved by adults, after all.

Yeah, they're not horribly behaved, just stunned by this sudden interruption (and possibly with a little magically induced apathy as well). I think one unpleasant surprise is all it will take with someone like Corky or Donzo (both of whom probably had the Hat hem and haw about Gryffindor before putting them in their respective Houses).
amamama From: amamama Date: December 1st, 2007 03:16 pm (UTC) (Link)
Eep! Not Vivian, please, no... Let her escape - steal something from Mathilde that lets her get away and to safety. Mathilde is just so creepy. Urk. An over-confident, talented, creepy, theatrical teen. Someone bring an axe down on her head, please?

Neville awesomeness is just good, him losing it is perfect, it shows how much she means to him. And please don't go for Interview!Canon. Stick to Book!Canon instead. The info we get there is at least something we know Jodemort had been considering properly.

Och. Now my poor stomach is all knots. Think hot chocolate will help? And yes, I'd love Hermione's book bag. Actually, I would love her abilities, so I could fix things like that myself...
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 09:22 pm (UTC) (Link)
Hot chocolate helps in all matters.

I want that bag as well. I'd make a suitcase and just pack my apartment into it to move.
kizmet_42 From: kizmet_42 Date: December 1st, 2007 03:35 pm (UTC) (Link)
The difference between the generations shows here. Not only would Harry and Hermione had their wands out, but anyone in the DA would have been at the ready.

I hope that Neville's reaction causes some discussion/action amongst the students. Ruthless in particular would have something to say, I'm sure.
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 09:24 pm (UTC) (Link)
In third year, I'm not sure they would. Certainly later, they would have. But Neville's really the only person in Harry's year, other than the trio, who we see making decisive actions before fifth year.
From: (Anonymous) Date: December 1st, 2007 03:54 pm (UTC) (Link)
Well, I want a certain sprite to wake up to the fact that her foster child was taken and come roaring out of that pond like Godzilla on overload only a whole lot crankier.

See pictures of Mount St. Helen's for details.

And it seems like it's time for the kids to get back into training, whether it's a defense or dueling club. I realize Defense Against the Dark Arts focuses on specific remedies for specific evils, so this might be an outside of class thing the students need. "OK, kids, someone has grabbed your teacher and is using her as a human shield. What are some good spells you can use in this situation?"

As far as that goes, stunning or paralyzing Vivian instead of their intended target probably wouldn't have made things worse. Hitting her with a porcupine spine curse, however, would have been really good. If you can make those really barbed spines with a coating of something like poison ivy on them, that would be even better.

Just thinking of automatic reactions to be trained for.

fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 09:28 pm (UTC) (Link)
In Harry's generation, nothing practical ever came from the adults--the D.A. only worked when it was a rebellion, and once it would have been approved, Harry stopped doing it. (This is the Gen X in J.K. Rowling, I think!) Teddy's generation is used to doing things which are arranged for them.

stunning or paralyzing Vivian instead of their intended target probably wouldn't have made things worse.

Reminds me of Speed, with the whole conversation about shooting the hostage in situations like this.
obsfuscation From: obsfuscation Date: December 1st, 2007 04:49 pm (UTC) (Link)

ahem. I just had to get that out. You write awesome action scenes. I hope Vivian makes good on her promise to Mathilde.

Great chapter.

fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 09:32 pm (UTC) (Link)
Well, the good thing about her promise was that it didn't have any specifics about how and when Mathilde would die, only that if she touched Teddy, she'd die. With a strong undertone of, "And it won't be of old age, beeyotch."
From: (Anonymous) Date: December 1st, 2007 05:52 pm (UTC) (Link)

Remus is going to be absolutely furious with Greyback if she shows up in the afterlife.
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: December 1st, 2007 09:40 pm (UTC) (Link)
I think Remus has hit a peak of fury already and may just be sustaining it for the rest of the book. Mathilde touched Teddy. And made less-than-veiled suggestions about what Greyback means to do with him.
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