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These Are The Names, Chapter 24 - The Phantom Librarian — LiveJournal
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These Are The Names, Chapter 24
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fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: July 21st, 2014 04:15 pm (UTC) (Link)
Yup. Though whether it's the Capitol stopping the train, or the people the Capitol will blame it on... hard to say in Panem.

I'll grab those. I was writing pretty fast yesterday, and they're probably not my only goofs! :D
From: (Anonymous) Date: July 21st, 2014 06:44 pm (UTC) (Link)
Of all the classic-Snow moves, this one makes the least sense. Snow always talks about the tough-love for the Districts, and then forgets the "love" part. That train of grain would probably do more to tamp down rebellion than a couple platoons of Peacekeepers (and of there's little the Capitol could do to piss off D12 more than prevent promised relief supplies from coming). (Note: I'm not criticizing your writing. This is !totally! what Snow would do, because he's a moron sometimes)
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: July 21st, 2014 07:19 pm (UTC) (Link)
It is... though I'm not sure this is really Snow's doing.
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