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The Phantom Librarian
Spewing out too many words since November 2003
The Last Tribute: Chapter Two
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fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: August 10th, 2014 03:22 am (UTC) (Link)

Re: Feedback/Catches Part 1

The detoxer and the medicine he's been taking are different -- if I were being totally logical, I'd have her switch him to the detoxer that she knew they were developing, but in GM, he'd never heard of it until she gave it to him on the victory tour, so I couldn't.

I thought I'd taken out the second gin thing (I noticed it earlier) -- guess it didn't take.

I think you're right that Effie meant it to try and calm Katniss down, but she's completely lost all sense of empathy and proper timing. It really was awful, but I also have the sense that it wasn't at all malicious. Just really, really tone deaf.

The DoF is its members, but it's also an organization with dues and a treasury and so on. So, let's say, that he had Tryphaena Buttery as a sponsor, and some of the others. But he also had their corporate sponsorship from the group treasury. That's what he lost.
From: (Anonymous) Date: August 11th, 2014 06:40 am (UTC) (Link)

Re: Feedback/Catches Part 1

He might be able to get it back, depending on legalities...if they're some some of non-profit/tax-exempt organization, and they already earmarked out the donation for tax purposes, they might not be able to reallocate those funds. I don't know that that would hold up in any sort of court of law, but he could try making that argument.
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