FernWithy (fernwithy) wrote,
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fernwithy

Golden Mean -- edits?

I'm going through "Golden Mean," and I'm about up to Chapter Four. The main thing I'm working on are things that feel emotionally off-kilter in it now that the back story has been written. So... anything that, on reflection, really seems to need fixing? Continuity matters other than the emotional stuff are good, too.

Thanks!
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