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Repost: The Narrow Path, Chapter 27 - The Phantom Librarian — LiveJournal
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Repost: The Narrow Path, Chapter 27
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From: (Anonymous) Date: February 15th, 2016 05:10 am (UTC) (Link)
Sorry, I don't have time to leave a more detailed comment, one continuity error that jumped out at me:

"We reach Beetee's in April, and he goes along, setting a precedent that I could do without. A week later, we get to mine."

If they're doing them one per week, wouldn't Beetees be a few months before Haymitch's?


ps, also keen to read more of the big empty if you get it going again. Or any other fandom you happen to feel like writing *coughSafecough*
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: February 17th, 2016 05:07 pm (UTC) (Link)
They did get off schedule, and things sped up once they could firebomb inside the shields, but yeah. I'll try to make that clearer.
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