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Repost: The Narrow Path, Chapter 27 - The Phantom Librarian — LiveJournal
Spewing out too many words since November 2003
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Repost: The Narrow Path, Chapter 27
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vesta_aurelia From: vesta_aurelia Date: February 15th, 2016 06:28 pm (UTC) (Link)
Katniss' whispered goodbye to Rue, at this point of the story, makes me tear up.
Every time.
You have a Bujoldian sense of spearpoint language. Beautifully timed.
vesta_aurelia From: vesta_aurelia Date: February 16th, 2016 05:31 pm (UTC) (Link)
And I did notice this:

Of course, we go off schedule almost immediately, because the first one, in the Amazon, is THE harder than we expected to destroy.

I don't think you need the article in allcaps.
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: February 17th, 2016 05:08 pm (UTC) (Link)
Why yes. I think the "the" must have migrated there from the sentence about Finnick's flag...
fernwithy From: fernwithy Date: February 17th, 2016 05:08 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thank you!
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