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Neville Longbottom in the Garden of the Hesperides, Chapter 3 - The Phantom Librarian — LiveJournal
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Neville Longbottom in the Garden of the Hesperides, Chapter 3
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From: (Anonymous) Date: November 14th, 2016 03:21 pm (UTC) (Link)
Hurray for Neville getting his own wand! I'll be interested to see his trip to Olivander's. It was good to see Sirius taking a peculiar interest in politics and livening up the Ministry, and to hear about the postwar fight on Lupin's behalf.
Delight at alive and well! marauders aside -- it's naturally endlessly fascinating and I'd love more and more, but it is ultimately intensely engrossing backstory -- I like what you're doing with Neville as Boy Who Lived, with his childhood knowledge of his legacy and ingrained doubts about living up to it. I'll be intrigued to see how you develop him as protagonist, and in how he handles the things in store for him, whether they're similar or different.
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