Bah, who needs sleep when you can churn out 3,679 words in five hours? I'm still behind, but if I can do this for two more days, I should be okay. And the posts I have scheduled for the end of the month should be LONG.
(The problem appears to have been that I didn't open out my points of view. If I get my quota tomorrow of going forward, I'm going to go back and edit in a few more in the first chapter, so that it's consistent.)