January 7th, 2005

Illustmaker me

Shifts, Chapter 26: Shifting Focus, pt 2

Okay, fairness--I did start this last night on schedule, then realized that I just didn't like how it was going. I had it taking place the next day, large section of the Order in attendance, and I kept finding myself flashing back because this is Shifts, and the major focus is on Remus, Dora, and Sirius--and I was skipping their reaction entirely. So I think, rather than mentioning that in passing and going on to a meeting of all of Harry's various designated grown-ups, I'll do the meeting more in passing and actually have, you know, my main guys react to it. Just for kicks.

So, narrative misstep causing lateness.

Anyway, Remus and Dora were getting used to the new shape of their relationship, and enjoying one another (though both of them are worried about Andromeda's behavior). They'd been out with Dora's old school friends, who wanted to meet Remus, and having a fairly good time, when they come across the new edition of the Quibbler, which everyone was reading--they saw the headline advertising Harry's interview.

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