Chapter Four of Shades (the first interlude) just went up at the Quill. I tried to fix some of the clunky sentences people didn't like. I'm really starting to get nervous about the Greyback plot. I write PG as far as actual presentation, but what's going on there is decidedly not kid-friendly. I think maybe I should bump the rating to PG13. Especially 'cause I know what's coming later on.